Claim:
People should be always open to new things in order to make their ideas more clearly.
Reasons:
-Some people who are not open mind think that they are always right even thougth they are wrong so they can make some mistakes when they have to make a decision.
-when they make bad decisions these can affect to their family or people they love.
-Besides they can lose people they love because it is not being always arguing with people we love.
Thesis:
People should be always open to new things in order to make their ideas more clearly because some people who are not open mind think that they are always right even thougth they are wrong so they can make some mistakes when they have to make a decision.
and when they make bad decisions these can affect to their family or people they love.
Besides they can lose people they love because it is not good being always arguing with people we love.
What difficulty did you have developing a thesis?
It is not so easy to develop an essay and the thesis is just a small part but the most important part in a essay because everything that we are going to write an essay depend on the thesis.
What do you think you need to work on?
i think i need to work more on summaries and write with my own words about this summary.
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